Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Museums are educational places where people can gain huge knowledge. Nowadays, people need to pay the entrance fee to visit a few museums but some other museums are not charging any. Although it has negative effects from the people view, it has several positive impacts.
Firstly, Many of the museums are not funded by the government so the museums could use the collected money to pay the bills such as electric, water bills etc of the museums and also they can use this amount to organise some attractive events which may help the visitors to learn about the traditional values and culture
of the particular place. They can maintain a clean environment in and around the museums by using this money. Furthermore, it also helps in expanding the
museum both in terms of quality and quantity, the new sculptures and painting can be purchased which keeps the peoples more engaging and they can gain more effective knowledge. It also helps to limit the number of visitors only the targeted audience will visit the place so it helps to control overcrowding.
In the other hand, the museum is the place which shows the historical and traditional value by charging a hefty amount some times it cannot be accessed by the interested peoples too. By visiting this place children may have a chance to develop their interest and hobbies and also Children should know about these traditional value and that can be gained by sculpture and history in the museums. For students who study history
in the college will also get benefited by the museums. It helps them to collect the data about the different classical events and to produce the cumulative report as a part of their research. So it should be free for the children and for the history pursing students. For example, a museum near Chennai had developed a lot by charging a
little amount for the people at the same time it helped the students and the children to attain the good historical knowledge by free admission.
In conclusion, From my point of view the advantages overheads the disadvantages. The effective utilization of money by the museums not only improve the museum's standard
but also it helps the society in gaining knowledge. With less government fund the museums can operate without any interupption in the service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94329896907 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60906607706 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5923898494 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141970790787 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550185743682 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047868325937 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682806668024 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382253238037 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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