Some old customs and traditions are not useful presently, so should be given up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying that we live in a modern era in which old rituals are increasingly forgotten and becoming a thing of the past. Of course, many people believe that the old practices should be abandoned. And I believe I completely agree with the point made. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my points.
First of all, the world is becoming more advanced, and technology is certainly not required to carry out old customs that have little or no value in the modern age. To elaborate, there was once a tradition of sending close and dear friends gifts and greeting each other by mail on special occasions. This old tradition, however, appears to have died out due to technology, particularly the introduction of smartphones, and has been replaced by text messaging. Second, old customs are now regarded as a waste of time and energy. For instance, thanks to new technologically advanced machinery that was not previously possible, they tend to use it. Women used to sew by hand, for example, but not anymore because modern sewing machines not only make the job easier but also save time. As a result, the practice of hand sewing is gradually fading, as if it were impractical in the modern era and unnecessary.
On the other hand, sexual identity has equal rights and importance in the modern world that were not previously available, which helps explain why women are responsible for household chores and, over time, gender roles and social roles. Members of the family have evolved. Previously, women were expected to do housework and had no opportunity to obtain an education. Today, however, managing family expenses with a single income is a difficult task; thus, the woman must work and the man must assist her in managing the household. To be sure, the old customs no longer exist.
Finally, in conclusion, I would like to reiterate my belief that some old customs will fade over time as they become obsolete in the present or when there is no need to continue in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84011627907 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71042340065 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8076220295 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9411764706 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156206741095 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484147612312 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495814961707 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931872675293 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022273930844 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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