Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Applying for a job has been a topic of public interests, so the question as to whether people should prefer to choose work satisfaction instead of permanent occupations and vice versa has been debated. Personally, I firmly agree with the latter as the work competition has been increasing significantly so it should be taken into serious consideration.
There is a widely-observed reason explaining why work satisfaction is extremely significant. If humans can seek a rewarding job they can have more enthusiastic motivations and make concerted efforts to fill all tasks. This, in the long run, can help them exposure to high-quality consequences in work. As a result, they can be rewarded then have more chances to climb the career ladder. We can see this in a way that teenagers tend to go for their all-time favorite occupations, leading to the potential development of fashion and art these days. In brief, forceful attempts at work in light of satisfaction can assist humans in getting a bright future.
Nevertheless. One school of thought believes that going for a perpetuated job is a better choice than personal work desires. This is probably because it is able to offer employees a stable income which may help them to pay all costs and fees in their family. Sooner or later, they can have harmonious relationships with each member of the family because the financial arguments will be lessened considerably. In short, domestic controversies can be restricted significantly whose results come from seeking a permanently good decent.
Overall, it appears to me that stable work should be prioritized. Despite countries, the severity of work has raised reêcntly, ranging from the increase of employment and the high level of underprivileged people
In conclusion, while advocates of job satisfaction would like to seek a job depending on their expectation rather than unwilling to get undesirable work, others argue that perpetuated occupations should be considered. I totally suppose that the latter overshadow the former due to ít monumental explosion.
I am really grateful If somebody can give me feedbacks.
Thank you so much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHETHER[2]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...as been a topic of public interests, so the question as to whether people should prefer to choose work sat...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to work'
Suggestion: to work
... whether people should prefer to choose work satisfaction instead of permanent occup...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding job they can have more enthusiastic motivations and make concerted efforts t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...t humans in getting a bright future. Nevertheless. One school of thought believes that go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, while, as to, in brief, in conclusion, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2761627907 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17527966642 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613372093023 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0373514637 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15364807486 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422740305209 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541549954745 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763690541188 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049892076475 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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