Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people
think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In decent decades, sport has been receiving a great deal of human attention around the world due to its interest. This led to the question whether the achievements in sports stem from corporal strength or perspective mind development. Personally, I reckon that both the strong points of mental and physical health can drive unimaginable success as this can help them ameliorate themselves comprehensively.
One of the most major reasons assists athletes get high achievement in competitions is the corporal strength. This is probably because sport requires candidates to have a well-built body and long-term stamina which are the outcomes of non-stop practicing. In some circumstances, it can provoke their physical potential, meaning that they can simply overcome some challenging obstacles and get more chances to become winners. We can see that some runners who are trained to run with an incredibly fast speed need endurance of foot for getting a gold medal. In brief, it is undeniable that corporal development plays a crucial role in competitions as it may bring candidates a host of amazing power.
On the other hand, some people think that mental power should be considered meticulously as the smart strategies which are exquisitely planned and researched can have a profound impact on the results of rounds. If athletes can maintain a patient attitude, they can simply find out the speedy ways to win their hostiles and strong-minded people can easily tackle some unexpected situations. For instance, online gamers need to focus on maintaining their flexible minds so that they are capable of taking advantage of useful variant strategies for each round. In brief, a strong mind may be perceived as an conducive aspect assisting competitors to have successful careers in sport.
Personally, although physical and mental increase always have their own benefits,I firmly suppose that knowingly taking advantage of both of them is a key to help humans get more comprehensively developed opportunities. This, in the long run, creates more chances for them to become winners. Besides, it may also depend on the type and trait of sport, forcing a particular person to follow a suitably scheduled and monitored course.
In conclusion, while some people suppose that physical power is a key leading to the unimaginable outcome, others believe that the mental outbreak is a must way to help candidates get high achievements. Personally, I think both of them should be taken into seriously due to perfectly human amelioration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rief, a strong mind may be perceived as an conducive aspect assisting competitors ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... increase always have their own benefits,I firmly suppose that knowingly taking ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, really, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon, i think, in brief, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29086538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00857744298 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2088764812 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.842105263 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224932588492 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595868842264 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420192985648 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108163571805 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464406800337 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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