Some people become famous at the young age. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
Some people become famous at their young stage while other need decades. I see no issues in the people who become popular at an early stage. However, if they become popular without noticeable effort, then I do not support them.
Gaining popularity from the earlier stage has many benefits. If a person becomes popular at his young stage, he will be motivated to work harder to become more successful as he has a lot of time left in his life. However, at the old stage, people have a very low mental and physical energy to work more and they will have only a few time left to taste the flavour of the success. Besides, becoming a famous person from an earlier stage means that he will get support from the earlier stage not only from his colleagues, friends and followers but also from the business organizations. For example, financial institutions are always ready to give loans to the successful people who can invest this and get more success.
However, I do not like the people who have been successful without significant effort. Many people have gained success because of their parent’s support. For example, Children of the famous actors can get chance in the film industry very easily and become popular from a very early stage which I think is unethical as they do very less for their position, compared to those who have gone through years of struggle to achieve success. This early popularity will make them quite arrogant and egoistic.
In conclusion, gaining popularity from young stage makes people more confident and energetic to work harder. However, people who have achieved their goals by their own effort are more respectable than those who have gained success by chance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89310344828 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44623761683 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496551724138 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0356620413 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152115648464 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723719290655 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784990468511 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12206274671 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080384128486 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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