Many museums charge for admission while others are free?
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Museums in many countries are open for all without charge while some countries still charge its public to enter there. Although there are some kinds of benefits of charging people in terms of financial health, I believe that the disadvantages of charging people are more than advantages.
One of the main advantages of charging people to enter in the museums is that museums can be financially strong. In some countries, governments do not spend much on their museums as they think it is a waste of money. Even if museums get financial assistance from the government, this is uncertain in the future due to unavoidable issues, for example economic disaster. In this case, it is sensible for the museums to charge some money and save the earnings for future crisis. Besides, if people are charged for entry, museums will not be overcrowded as people will be demotivated to go there with lots of friends, and thus authorities could manage the museums peacefully.
Although museums can be financially strong by charging visitors, the basic principle of the museums might not be established. The basic purpose of the museum is to enrich the knowledge of the public with country’s history and culture. If people have to pay entry fee, they will easily be demotivated to visit there as it is not possible for many people to afford entry fee, and thus the purpose of establishing museums will not be fulfilled. It is the government responsibility to assist the museums financially. Besides, if museums are free, rather than wasting time on internet or gossiping with friends, young people will be encouraged to spend time in museums, and thus deterring youth from wasteful activities.
To conclude, although museums can be benefitted financially by charging an entry fee, the drawbacks of this policy are more than benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07284768212 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83882034046 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476821192053 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9201849759 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382249153914 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158826480031 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706361086252 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247874157822 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995285162051 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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