Some people believe that advertisement is useful and informative. Others think it is false and only helps to raise prices. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
In today's competitive world, advertisement has become a significant tool to market a product. Some believe that adverts increase awareness about products amongst people that might help; however, others argue that the only motive of advertising is to induce individuals to buy unnecessarily. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and provide my support for the former view.
Certainly, due to the rising competition, everyone is in the race of getting name and fame. Thus, here comes the role of advertisements which influences the society for the new launches. Apparently, advertising is the most direct way for companies to tempt their customers about their new product and its quality. Redmi mobile series, for instance, is now in great demand, not only because of its outstanding features but also due to their alluring as well as creative adverts. Earlier, though, it was not even in anyone's knowledge, but now Redmi phones are one of the trending mobiles, and this all is because of the way company advertised it.
However, those who advocate that advertisements are of no use, but to raise the cost only, might think that companies generally highlight only the brighter side of their respective item in order to promote it. Therefore, when buyers come across only positive aspects of that particular product they eventually end up purchasing something which is not required, regardless of the provided incomplete picture of that item. One such example is Energy drinks, which are advertised as energy booster to make people feel alert and energetic, whereas many physicians claim it as a hazard for one's health because it might cause high blood pressure and heart palpitations.
To conclude, I assert that advertising serves an important role in society by enhancing knowledge of individuals and boosting economy of companies, nonetheless blindly buying things without having thorough research can be proved as deceptive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26045016077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86103174245 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639871382637 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1636903987 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187250426894 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613844848476 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062153986464 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107883443992 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893990487082 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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