Some people think that public libraries are no longer important while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay topics:

Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There have been many discussions among people saying libraries are no longer important. Every humans have different different approaches because the technology is changing day by day. There are ample of argue as below paragraph.

On the one hand , it is needless to say the technology has changed and it is changing gradually day by day. In the past year ago mostly people were go to the libraries for reading the books and make the notes. It was a most important part of the school and colleges. The libraries has many benefits for example there are number of books available we can get easily. We can get the those books which are not available in the market. And can make the notes easily because in the libraries room we can get the pin drop silence and consider at work.

On the other hand , Number of people says that nowadays there is no need of libraries because nowadays it is digital era. All book and magazines are available on internet. People can get the any types of books form internet. Nowadays mostly the youngsters are not preferred to the libraries. They say it is a wastage of time . We we have computer , laptop, and mobile phones, we can get any book form this way. The libraries nowadays does not have benefits for example if we are very occupied in work and other places we cannot go to the library we can kill the many time and we can use the internet and get anything what we have need. Moreover, nowadays people have less interest in the libraries and there no available new books for our knowledge. Because owners of the libraries not keep new books, so the people mostly prefer the online books.

In conclusion, while many people says that libraries are very useful and other say is not useful whether I restate we can get the online books easily instead of libraries.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60559006211 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39342640779 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447204968944 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5130003731 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0526315789 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134485399345 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499524983322 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602275303972 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991910079226 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225287614986 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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