Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10240963855 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.49045777857 2.80592935109 160% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.855421686747 0.561755894193 152% => OK
syllable_count: 138.6 506.74238477 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.8 1.60771543086 50% => Avg_syllables_per_word is low.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 491.060756594 49.4020404114 994% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.666666667 106.682146367 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.3333333333 20.7667163134 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00724513174768 0.244688304435 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00873700333337 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0123559886085 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00724513174768 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.33 50.2224549098 166% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.3 11.3001002004 135% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.99 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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