Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and use of the world's fuel resources to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Travelling has increased day by day. A lot of people has used a different type of transports like bus, car, airplane, etc. But, many people perspective air mode should be prohibited due to it does creates a lot of pollution. But, I believe it is not possible because many reasons. I agree to the given statement and put my idea in the following paragraph.
To initiate with, not only an air travel should restricted due to your resources but also other reasons. An airplane and helicopter creates a lot of harmful gases like carbon dioxide which is very bad for atmosphere. In addition, use of fossil fuel in an air travel is very different, pure and very expensive than other vehicles. All country has limited sources. Furthermore, parts of an airplane is very costly and cannot obtain easily. So, we have to develop such as new technology for air travel which uses renewable energy sources such as wind or sun.
On the other hand, It is the biggest transport for world. people can become suffer a lot of difficulty without this mode. For example, they cannot send high weight belonging in other country. An air travel save our precious time and people could not go to outside country without air travel. It is provided a lot of facility such as free Wi-Fi, breakfast, Medical and so on. However, its harmful effects such as pollution and depletion of world's fuel are not negligible.
To sum up, my opinion on par with their the use of air travel is not very convenient from long period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67300380228 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56461552978 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1253646863 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2777777778 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238300394609 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658396865523 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053765762114 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135064730119 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300891703247 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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