SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT ALLOWING CHILDREN TO MAKE THEIR OWN DECISION ON EVERYDAY MATTERS IS LIKELY TO RESULT IN A SOCIETY OF INDIVIDUALS WHO ONLY THINK ABOUT THEIR OWN WISHES. OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS IMPORTANT FOR CHILDREN TO MAKE DECISION ABOUT MATTERS THAT AFFECT THEM. DISCUSS BOTH OPINIONS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION
PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE ISSUE AS SOME BELIEVES THAT CONSIDERING CHILDREN TO MAKE THEIR OWN CHOICES WILL RAISE SELFISHNESS AMONG THEM WHILE OTHERS SUGGEST CHILDREN must HAVE SOME FREEDOM AS IT WILL BOOST THEIR CONFIDENCE. IN MY OPINION, PARENTS SHOULD ALLOW CHILDREN TO FORMULATE SOME STANCE, WHICH WILL ULTIMATELY BENEFIT YOUNGSTERS IN NEAR FUTURE.
ON THE ONE HAND, JUVENILE OF TODAY WILL BE THE STALWART OF FUTURE, AND THAT’S WHY INTENSIVE CARE SHOULD BE RENDERED DURING CHILDHOOD. MOST OF THE DEVELOPMENTS ESPECIALLY CRITICAL THINKING AND COGNITIVE ABILITIES ARE MODIFIED THROUGH THIS PERIOD. FOR EXAMPLE, A STUDY CONDUCTED IN AMERICA ILLUSTRATES THAT YOUNGS WHO WERE ALLOWED TO CHOOSE THEIR TOYS BECOME MORE SELF-ESTEEMED AND CONFIDENT WHEN THEY GROW UP THAN THEIR COUNTERPARTS, WHO DID NOT HAVE THAT LUXURY. HENCE, PARENTS AS WELL TEACHERS BELONGING TO ELEMENTARY SCHOOL SHOULD BE MORE CAREFUL REGARDING THIS ISSUE, AND ENSURE THAT CHILD ARE GIVEN SOME LIBERTY TO FORMULATE DAY-TO-DAY DECISION.
ON THE OTHER HAND, WHEN CHILDREN DO NOT ENJOY THE FREEDOM TO INITIATE THINKING AND GUARDIANS DETACH THEM FROM EVERYDAY TASKS, THEY TURN INTO AN INDIVIDUAL, WHO IS SELFISH AND LESS SYMPATHETIC. CONSEQUENTLY, THEY CAN NOT FELL SORROW OF OTHERS, AND GRADUALLY ENGAGE INTO VARIOUS TYPES OF DELINQUENCY SUCH AS ROBBERY, THEFT AND SO ON. FOR INSTANCE, A STUDY IN CHINA REVEALS THAT CHILDREN WHO ARE LESS PASSIONATE AND UNSOCIAL POSSESS HIGHER POSSIBILITY TO PARTICIPATE IN ANTI-SOCIAL ACTIVITIES. RESULTANTLY to FORM A BETTER SOCIETY AS WELL AS COUNTRY, WE SHOULD ALLOW CHILDREN TO IMPLEMENT DECISIONS, WHICH AFFECTS THEIR OWN LIFE AND BOOST SELF-RESPECT.
IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE THAT BOTH PARENTS AND TEACHERS SHOULD TEACH CHILDREN HOW TO DECIDE ON EVERYDAY MATTERS HOWEVER THERE SHOULD BE SOME BOUNDARY AS THEY ARE TENDER AND DO NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT IS RIGHT OR WRONG.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ERTY TO FORMULATE DAY-TO-DAY DECISION. ON THE OTHER HAND, WHEN CHILDREN DO NOT ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34448160535 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78871612362 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7932674234 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.272727273 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28348830339 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925255001906 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889811071138 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164907102867 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801730042383 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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