Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many people, who argue that giving capital punishment to the guilty is not a suitable act, while others argue that people should get what they deserve. I am a firm believer of the saying, "you reap what you sow".
Firstly, the most intrinsic reason is that, if a person has committed a petty crime, but does not get a punishment, will get motivated to commit more serious and evil crimes. So, it is mandatory to nip the evil in the bud. Moreover, I believe that a person, who was engaged in low intensity crime, must have the courage to get involve in high level of crimes also. For instance: Many investigations on criminals have revealed that, they got indulge in more serious criminal acts because they did not got caught when they initially performed small crimes like stealing a bicycle or picked someone's pocket.
Secondly, the law and order situation of a country would be disturb if criminals will not be accountable for their act or they get released after committing a small crime. Citizens of such countries will take the officials for granted and will not get disciplined.
Contrary to the above points, some people believe that capital punishment should be given to the people who have committed most extreme crimes because, if authorities starts giving capital punishment on small crimes also then there will be myriad people who will get hanged. However, I do not agree with them because people will not be afraid while performing any evil act. But if they think about the consequences of after getting caught red handedly, then they would feel little reluctant while performing any crime.
In conclusion, I believe that people should get capital punishment irrespective of the level or intensity of their crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95254237288 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58398488384 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4166127641 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283321227426 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107265891297 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104522398418 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17852836173 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708943120606 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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