Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Some people said that governments should ban capital punishment while others disagree with this opinion since this punishment still need to exist for the most serious crimes. Personally, this punishment has both views and this essay will show suitable reasons and explanations.
First of all, if capital punishment does not exist, it will save a lot of people against painful death since this punishment causes victims having a slow death. For example, electrical punishment is a common capital punishment that many countries use to give criminals a death penalty. These people will sit in the electrical chair then they will suffer a high voltage of electricity through their mind, which causes them instant death. Therefore, many people consider this is so barbaric and they believe laws should let them a second chance to repent rather than make them feel pain like that. Moreover, removing capital punishment will reduce the risk of criminals trying to escape from prison because avoiding danger is a natural human instinct. Take Vietnam as an example, lawers often judge people who commit doing crimes jail penalties so they can think about what things they have done and help them return the society when they come out the prison.
On the other hand, in some cases, we still need to order this hardest punishment as a final decision. This is because some criminals who do lots of illegal jobs such as killing, transporting a huge number of drugs, and so on, these people can not let them free since they will ruin the community so capital punishment is a good solution for this circumstance.
In conclusion, I think governments should remove capital punishment that makes criminals feel pain most and do this punishment as a final result when there are no other choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 247, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01351351351 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49863914751 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0604034713 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243732484484 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106254216841 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781026795024 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172711693284 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380061988129 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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