Some people believe that children should have important lessons other than classes in school.tgat is visiting local businessess or public buildings.To what extend do you agree or dis agree
Many progressive schools today conducting programs and study classes outside the school campus such as public buildings or business centers for innovative learning experience of the students. In my opinion, I believe that, it can be a good opportunity for children to learn novel ideas and skills for their practical knowledge, which are not usually available in school environment.
To begin with, sometimes classroom can be a tedious and stressful and therefore, more practical experience would make students creative thinking and inquisitive power. For example, while visiting historical museum, students can get more chances to see an object as well as handle real things like coins, inscriptions, utensils of ancient times and so on. As a result, they can reinforce study of history and recall their information more easily.
On the other hand, field trip to local businesses could be a delight memory and by the way, improve their knowledge regarding certain items, which they are using regularly. For instance, travel to a near by cashew nut factory, that not only to have a new information but also to know the effort which they are taking place so far. Due to these, students can get inventive erudition as well as kindness.
However, of those study tours may have more fun and direct contact with the local people, which make students as recreational activities rather than learning experience. This can defeat the actual purpose of such trips, and therefore, some parents are sceptical about these actions.
To conclude, improve student's cognitive thinking through visiting or giving project works as well as lessons outside the school compound. So that next generation become practically more experienced in the field of study, and also their life's journey would be more interesting and creative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...erience of the students. In my opinion, I believe that, it can be a good opport...
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...udents. In my opinion, I believe that, it can be a good opportunity for childre...
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...nd skills for their practical knowledge, which are not usually available in schoo...
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...all their information more easily. On the other hand, field trip to ...
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...ng regularly. For instance, travel to a near by cashew nut factory, that not only to ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'by the way', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25386996904 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.108359133127 0.155533422707 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123839009288 0.0946595960268 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0804953560372 0.0501214627716 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030959752322 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114551083591 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0247678018576 0.0403226058552 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71326173647 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278637770898 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650154798762 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030959752322 0.021408717616 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123839009288 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1893.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.55017301038 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40830449827 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314878892734 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22491349481 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152249134948 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71326173647 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 71.4137373478 60.7387585426 118% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0833333333 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1943131311 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.75 127.492653851 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 0.814263465372 194% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.5712226067 49.1944974215 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.78873239437 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132652043073 0.332605444948 40% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0802811203228 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0422898459883 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605150249691 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.087486437095 0.148594505496 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558352143584 0.134430193775 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404166000965 0.0742795772207 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.195855810349 0.324371583561 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0262216737108 0.0638462369009 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868253358445 0.228012699653 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432707510215 0.058150111329 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.