‘Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative.
Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
The parent plays an important role in everyone's life. There is no doubt about it, that is why many people believe that children should spend all of their time with their families. But everything has a flip side, so I will discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of the issue.
The good side of spending all of your free time with your family is also evident. Due to such times, family members are more connected, love and understand each other better. If these things had occurred, domestic violence such as domestic abuse wouldn't have taken place, and many children who witnessed abuse would no longer have suffered such a lack of love.
Although that's good, it also presents many potential hazards if children are not exposed to the outside world. Having all your free time spent with your family makes them lonely and possibly turns them into "lonely" children. The lack of contact with outsiders and only familiar family members will partially create fear in children, as well as fears of interacting with strangers. Afterward, children will become more faint-hearted and quiet, rather than cheerful and active as other children their age. The feeling of aloneness will last throughout childhood, and then when they reach adulthood, they will not have friends to hang out with. Imagine if the children's loved ones are no longer with them, who will they confide in if family is the only person they can talk to and communicate with. That was a very harmful thing. In addition to having an impact on the psychology of children, the children's soft skills and life skills will not be enhanced from spending time with their families alone. As a consequence, the child's agility will slowly decline as a result of being quite stagnant and unable to respond when faced with emergency situations.
In conclusion, while children should spend most of their time with their parents, they also need more time to interact with their peers so that they can develop their social skills. There's a balance between spending time with parents and interacting with them since both are vital to the development of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98599439776 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51382106483 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5024908578 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.705882353 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323560071725 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104643380697 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933408255054 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219998075084 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717063479838 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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