Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them
1. In what ways are computers a hindrance?
2. What is your opinion?
Today's world is regarded for technological advancements and innovations and the world is controlled by Artificial Intelligence. Among all, computers influence peoples' work and family life. In my view, computers have created more problems than benefits it provide bot in professional and personal life.
Further to that, excess usage of computers have resulted in health problems, which were not in past time. Hence, in twenty first century people are highly suffered with visual problems, bones related problems and affect in nerves system. Not only that, medical research findings also reveal that, more time spent on computers by children playing computer games are victims of mental disorders in their later ages. These are negative causes by computers.
Moreover, the recent cyber attacks are result of high penetration in computers. These lead to access to confidential data by unauthorized personal, virus threats and corrupting files. These lead to unnecessary issues to countries.
In my view, computers are hindrance to general public than the benefits they gain. It also affects the language skills of younger generation, in particularly the spelling and grammar in English language, due to auto corrective option available in computers. In addition, future generation's reliance on computers are also high, which affects their studies.
In conclusion, computers generate harmful affects to society. it creates complicated health hazards and cyber attacks by unauthorized and illegal personal. On the other hand, it affects valuable time of young adults, which they could utilize for education
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
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Suggestion: Further,
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Suggestion: generations'; generation's
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.312727272727 0.247107183377 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.123636363636 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123636363636 0.0946595960268 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0363636363636 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0363636363636 0.0437548338989 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127272727273 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0363636363636 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8164999465 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290909090909 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.04 0.0861772015684 46% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00363636363636 0.021408717616 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0109090909091 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1611.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 242.0 316.048096192 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.65702479339 6.12580529183 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.46694214876 0.374742101984 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.367768595041 0.28420135186 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.256198347107 0.203846283523 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173553719008 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8164999465 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 66.5845004674 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.125 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3519882144 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 127.492653851 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.9018595041 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.42592592593 1.69124875643 143% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298856445921 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111925329973 0.102741220458 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.081984629828 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537019610563 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115443481949 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112719250158 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707894216072 0.0742795772207 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.218198221229 0.324371583561 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.032298737647 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167202601466 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792844437558 0.058150111329 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.