The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These are maps of an island, which demonstrate transmission of it after the development of tourism in the island. The development of tourism has attracted number of facilities been built to attract more tourists to the island.
The island was a bear land with few coconut trees is found in it. Furthermore, footpath is also observed in beach.
On contrast, a drastic difference is observed in the island after the development. There are number of accommodations being built and they are inter connected with foot path. Moreover, the accommodations built near beach have footpath connection.
beach and reception.
In addition, he beach is built with swimming facilities and vehicle tracks are built, which connect restaurants, reception and pie, where surfing boats are being anchored.
In summary, vast variations are observed in the island after the tourist facilities are being constructed there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
...accommodations being built and they are inter connected with foot path. Moreover, the...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beach
... near beach have footpath connection. beach and reception. In addition, he beac...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'beaches'.
Suggestion: beaches
...each and reception. In addition, he beach is built with swimming facilities and v...
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Line 8, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...where surfing boats are being anchored. In summary, vast variations are observed...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26875 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.23125 0.116061578633 199% => Less verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.04375 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.03125 0.0366838410393 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0131127313244 191% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13125 0.155750635184 84% => OK
Participles: 0.11875 0.0379272487307 313% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.99641822968 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0125 0.0210936926555 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0875 0.0948980150116 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01875 0.00967000014798 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 911.0 1161.00487805 78% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.9 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4609929078 5.90752243213 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375886524823 0.337110787985 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312056737589 0.247514529752 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22695035461 0.171178102325 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170212765957 0.112407865282 151% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99641822968 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 48.6474443663 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1 23.0094962315 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6868996018 42.9750493124 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 135.714022679 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 23.0094962315 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.689975730869 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.84146341463 156% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 45.3056737589 47.7609492067 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.80434782609 2.94281807926 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336340895122 0.418131533498 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.180955700403 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.122292499112 0.0850326197045 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.753120422287 0.706616315825 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199180879325 0.157042692854 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153889385743 0.228904883108 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851734344253 0.108899403657 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.191047826452 0.367819155151 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0713155643986 0.0812612215331 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185426274128 0.316326947829 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789781050843 0.0921553760075 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.