Some people believe that a great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial. D o you think the advantages of a greater difference outweigh the disadvantage?
It is often argued that, parental child age difference would have multiple gains in many ways. While, there were some advantages like, over protection, and years full experienced parents have to be more practical in relation with children. However, in this essay explain about the disadvantage would be more than the benefits. Such as, lack of friendly relation, strict atmosphere, probably in orthodox view of aged parents and aging problems.
On the one hand, from a famous proverb illustrates the experience makes men perfect. In brief, parents life long experience makes them to be more care and affection on to the children. They may often give healthy advice, and instruct to follow right paths in life by numerous examples. For instance, grand parents were always the best advocates and advisers of younger children. Similarly, love and affection would prone to be in parents who has more age difference. As in the children behaviour also would be neat and tidy by the help of age difference.
Nevertheless, in contrast, lower age variation would produce greater friendly manner and children may able to express feelings and emotions genuinely. In other words, children has psychological and emotional bond with parents who is understand the things actually presented. Almost similar aged parents could accept the recent changes and attitudes of community than some orthodox parent who is aged. For example, students from colombia university reports of parent child relation emphasize the most students best friend was his or her parent which is young age. Moreover, high disparity in age makes parents prone to get health problems and young child would take the responsibility on parents than the academic preference.
To sum up, love and care may often get from the aged parents. Nonetheless, children would be more free and enjoyable in parents who is lesser difference in age. Thereby in my perspective, the positive feed back of greater disparity between ages may surpass the consequences of early liability and poor friendly atmosphere in the house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'instruct' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...often give healthy advice, and instruct to follow right paths in life by numerous example...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
... and emotional bond with parents who is understand the things actually presented. Almost s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in brief, in contrast, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25981873112 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72476401781 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5580984891 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7222222222 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275445184225 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909822035884 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546785467206 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181678018475 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04050521774 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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