Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There have always been voices that argue against the use of weapons by law enforcement, even in legitimate situations, due to concerns about escalating violence and crime. I do not think that there is much correlation between arming police officers and increased crime.
From a hypothetical perspective, over-militarized police officers or armed ones who just lack of protocol and ethical training may create an atmosphere of tension and fear, making individuals more likely to react with aggression or resistance. Likewise, if the suspects are also armed, a verbal confrontation is likely to turn into a gun battle. On the other hand, by shifting towards alternative to using force, like negation, non-lethal tools and techniques, this escalated high-risk situation would be reduced.
However, it is implausible and uncompelling to accuse armed police officers for causing more violence and crime. In contrast to assumed scenarios above, it can be reasonable to allow the use of firearms by law enforcement in actual situations, which nevertheless deters potential crimes and secures the public safety more effectively. Additionally, social factors and regulations, such as the legality of civilian firearm ownership in some countries, added to economic recession and high unemployment, are part of the root causes of higher levels of crimes rather than weaponizing police officers. Even if police officers use other de-escalation tactics and tools with these concerns prevailing, we cannot expect them to mitigate the conflicts and tension through peaceful means.
In conclusion, permission of the use of forceful interventions may heighten the levels of violence especially if it is not necessary or if it is used indiscriminately. However, there are also situations where weapon use by police officers is imperative to prevent further harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57446808511 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17694083526 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2438620801 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155680876264 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611837433711 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383533875677 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918227288904 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308903729207 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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