Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Dealing with failure or dissapointed status, each individuals have difference ways to get over it. Some people choose to accept the bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, meanwhile, others believe that it is much better to endeavor and improve such situations.
Accepting a bad situation is one of the main keys to success. Human being is made to be failed, disapointed, not just happy all the time. In other words, problems like depression, unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of income are parts of life and; therefore, it is ordinary to accept that and move forward. Moreover, if people are not equipped enough to solve the problems, they will be in risk when striving to fix the situation.
On the contrary, adopting the bad-feeling is not totally the greatest choice, it is better to endeavor and zero in finding solutions. Making an effort to improve the situation makes people more strong, brilliant and flexible. For instance, if someone is unemployed, then he try his best to find jods, he will gain the fanancial stability. Therefore, only by adressing the problems can people improve their living condition. In addition, striving to clear up the situation, people can broaden thier horizon, become sucessful in career.
In conclusion, when it comes to bad situation, people take differential actions to solve problems. Like the coin has two faces, each measure has its own benefits and drawbacks. To my extent of view, I prefer try to improve the situation than strive to accept it, doing something rather than staying silently, waiting and learning to accept the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...ance, if someone is unemployed, then he try his best to find jods, he will gain the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09433962264 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84433195656 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.075448729 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335044999729 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950241882737 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114818442805 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191158197744 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843352372247 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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