Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Life is the name of ups and down. Sometimes situation makes life beautiful and we enjoy that moments and suddenly some incident make life miserable. Some people believe that life goes as it is. They accept their condition like shortage of money and unsatisfactory job on the other hand other school of though beleive on chnage they beleive tha everything can be chnaged it all depends on their dreams and struggle. Both group have strong arguments on their believe.
The group of society which believe life go with flow why they take tension to desire more and more because human can never be thankful which he had. if someone have unsatisfactory job and shortage f money it can be acceptable but if they have not a happy family life no meaning of anything which they had. A desired job want to many sacrifies This bunch of people are happy with their life and don't struggle to change it.
The other school of thought believe on struggle and improve their situations. We live once and we should male it best if we satisfied which we have then life will be stopped and bore.when human come on earh he was live in a jungle and eat grass but after time he make it better now he is unbeatable he can fly and thing what he want.people want enough money as he can even buy anything in this world.
Both group of people have strong argument on their opinion but in my opinion if we satisfy on what we have we can not get more and make life more comfortable but on other hand if we always i search of more and more we cannot satisfy in our lifes which make life tensed. We should thankful what we have but must struggle to make life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey accept their condition like shortage of money and unsatisfactory job on the o...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other school of though beleive on chnage they beleive tha everything can be chnag...
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Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...th group have strong arguments on their believe. The group of society which believe...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...man can never be thankful which he had. if someone have unsatisfactory job and sho...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...er be thankful which he had. if someone have unsatisfactory job and shortage f money...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad. A desired job want to many sacrifies This bunch of people are happy with thei...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of people are happy with their life and dont struggle to change it. The other sch...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bests', 'wells'?
Suggestion: bests; wells
...ons. We live once and we should male it best if we satisfied which we have then life...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e satisfied which we have then life will be stopped and bore.when human come on e...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
... jungle and eat grass but after time he make it better now he is unbeatable he can f...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...unbeatable he can fly and thing what he want.people want enough money as he can even...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fortable but on other hand if we always i search of more and more we cannot satis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42574257426 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27727555314 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481848184818 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3400184066 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128349392778 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609796750739 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404488124456 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875794247906 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418369290543 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.