Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Every people in this world has their own mindset for living. Some people accept the bad phase in there life and some try to get over it. Overall, this essay will describe you both type of person and their opinion about bad or good situations.

People in this world have numerous bad situation in there life. Majority of people are observed to have bad situation such as unsatisfactory job. People are often seen to work in the different field apart from there like, as they face quite shortage of money so people with no choice chooses to do jobs in different field. With increasing global inflation, it is observed to have increased in prices rates in FMCG sector, oil & gas sector, with this it creates quiet difficult for middle class or lower class people to survive in this field. Inflation has affected the whole economy. It has observed that often people accept there bad situations and lives the same life until death comes to the bad. Even it is seen that an educated person such as engineer or person with a MBA degree in society use to work in non-technical field such as sales job as due to earn money.

However, people with great determination always tries and find the ways to overcome the present situations. It is not mandatory that people will get work as per there kind always, sometimes they might have to accept the fact then try to achieve growth in there present field. Eventually, most of people overcome from this situation and even rising inflation doesn't affect there present life. People with such thoughts and enthusiasm always invest and saves money for future phase. It observed that people with such mindset ends up with positive result in there life.
Overall, it always good to improve your bad situation irrespective of any situation rather making situation worsen in this growing global inflation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2298136646 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95632600218 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.26682502 43.030603864 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.4 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147192695365 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881997044602 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271271973767 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110054782835 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347974840375 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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