Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
It is convinced that bit more people prefer to receive a nasty condition rather than attempt to change it into the more convenient circumstances. Personaly, I believe some people have propensity to alter the situation into preferable condition.
In the one hand, it is a common necessary advantage that the effort to turn difficult state for many people would bring out the chance of success and obtaine what they want. It is because attempt to change their nasty circumctances could open the door of fruitfulness. For example, people who desire to have high income afterwards they establish few business such as build some markets in the center of city, they have possibility to gain much money rather than people that have no encourage to build up it then they would not receive anything. As result, preferable situation is merely on the side of people who would create any efforts. In short, it is important to many people who want to turn their life give some works to acquire their triumph.
Even so, there are few demerit to size up that admit an unsavory condition is a right choice. Firstly, many people would constantly in uncomfortable circumstances while they could release from it. It is due to bit more people possess a fear of failure and forfeit what they have. For instance, an office boy who work in a small company has low salary but he have no encourage to move in other company which offer higher payment caused by his frightened of rejection and lost his current occupation. Secondly, people who settled in unconvenient space have a frail mentality since their mentals are not trained to accept the worse default. For the model, an office employee who invariably blamed by the manager would be more afraid to looking for a new job because her unpreparedness to obtain the new wretched manager beside she has another probality to gain the good employer. As a result, receive a bad situation is not the correct option for every single person.
To sum up where my track, the preference to turn bad circumstances into preferable situation is the best way than the mindset to kept a horrible state. Volition to change condition would lead people to pleasurable state.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'building'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: building
...ther than people that have no encourage to build up it then they would not receive anyth...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun demerit seems to be countable; consider using: 'few demerits'.
Suggestion: few demerits
...uire their triumph. Even so, there are few demerit to size up that admit an unsavory condi...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'demerits'?
Suggestion: demerits
... their triumph. Even so, there are few demerit to size up that admit an unsavory condi...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...n a small company has low salary but he have no encourage to move in other company w...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'moving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: moving
...has low salary but he have no encourage to move in other company which offer higher pay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, even so, for example, for instance, in short, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6700896761 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542780748663 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5815814136 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181296838539 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591885952138 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456975020184 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111821545309 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.006240986585 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.