Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Every single person has their own faint and life, some people have boring job or maybe they don’t have much money. A part of society trust that people in bad situation can accept and continue their life. In contrast, many people think the best way to live is get rid of that bad period of life. In this essay, I will give my comment about these opinions.
On the one hand, people who suffer the hard stage in their life is discouraged to get rid of that situation or maybe there is no way to improve reality. If there is no way out, learning to release and accept maybe is the best way to live a happier life. If we continue to chase something that doesn’t exist, we can end up with pains, and chaos. So accept the reality will give that person a happier life and peace.
On the other hand, many people keep moving forward to find the solution for bad circumstances. The one who can do that have brave and a good mental to keep up with their works. Sometimes, they archive bad result or maybe the problem is not solved. But this kind of people, they believe they can change reality, so that mindset becomes their strength and they try over and over to solve the problem.
In my view, the choose is belong to the person, I don’t think that we can talk to everyone that they need to work to get through bad situation, that is very rude, the same with we try to convince they need to quit when they are trying their best. After all, we all want peace and happiness, so let the choose to the one who need.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ver to solve the problem. In my view, the choose is belong to the person, I don’t think ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...we all want peace and happiness, so let the choose to the one who need.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, after all, in contrast, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26388888889 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05339307705 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503472222222 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3161856934 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164747108428 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606695877285 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438097924633 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103775263419 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057427394106 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ver to solve the problem. In my view, the choose is belong to the person, I don’t think ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...we all want peace and happiness, so let the choose to the one who need.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, after all, in contrast, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26388888889 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05339307705 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503472222222 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3161856934 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164747108428 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606695877285 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438097924633 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103775263419 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057427394106 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.