Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Some people think the best way to solve bad situations is accepted that. Other people think it is better to improve and change situations.
On one hand people they accepted their fate in difficult situations, it’s because they can’t change it, not because they want to change for example “ unsatisfactory job”, they can’t easily leave that job and get a new job because there’s a very high chance that after they quit they may not be accepted to any other place then they will be unemployed. or the fact that they do not have money it could be there job have a low salary or they even don't have a job. They do not dare to take a risk to improve that situations because they know that when they fail, they will harder before they try. So they choose to accept it.
On the other hand if they just stay where they are then their whole life will be miserable so they need to try hard and improve it little by little.Usually these people have a more progressive will that even if they are poor, they will still try and try everything to improve the obstacles that they encounter in life. Although they know that there will be certain risks, but in my opinion, this is a very good way because I see that they always want to improve their difficulties and they do not accept to stand still with their difficulties but they have to try to change it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...her place then they will be unemployed. or the fact that they do not have money i...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r place then they will be unemployed. or the fact that they do not have money it ...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...here job have a low salary or they even dont have a job. They do not dare to take a ...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Usually
...ry hard and improve it little by little.Usually these people have a more progressive wi...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... even if they are poor, they will still try and try everything to improve the obstacles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42629482072 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29108261281 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486055776892 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.734406871 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.875 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146078191895 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109698941606 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851546071652 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170111749733 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118496126399 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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