Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is the most powerful tool to make people convinced to buy a particular product. However, because of the various options for analysis, the situation has changed, and nowadays, people think multiple times before buying a product.
Advertising and brand have a lot of impact on the mass people in buying goods. There are many people in the world who are still persuaded by the falsified advertising and so-called high-branded products and purchase without thinking of its actual benefits. This is very evident in the smartphone industry, where people are ready to pay a lot to buy the so-called high-branded mobile, though other manufacturers offer the same features with much lower price. Besides, people in the third-world countries are also convinced by the western cosmetics which are sold in the promise of better skin treatment, though consumers can get the same result from local products with lower price. Consequently, people waste a lot of money.
However, the mindset of people is changing. Nowadays, we have different options to buy goods that have a good balance between price and benefits, for example, comparing a product’s price and offerings with others through online. iPhone, the top smartphone brand, has seen a 10% drop in its sales in the last year because people now focus more on features and benefits rather than brand. Besides, in many countries, the income of the general people has not increased sufficiently compared to the day-to-day expenses. This makes them avoid wasting money on unnecessary goods and focus extremely on savings for the future.
In conclusion, most people no longer tend to be convinced by the falsified advertising because they can now understand whether the goods are of use to them and the prices are reasonable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: IPhone
...d offerings with others through online. iPhone, the top smartphone brand, has seen a 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, so, still, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23263888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79673867262 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6746639687 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891806388151 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332658037436 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279067935814 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588296819452 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156500855146 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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