Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
Today, planet earth is like a global village where you can find different kinds of products from one part of the earth to another on few spins of time. Technology has changed the world completely that now citizens have numerous option. I completely agree with this statement in this essay.
Society has been change now and so as the taste of customers. It’s too easy for anyone to buy one product of American by staying in Nepal within a single click. The business of online store is gaining popularity rapidly day by day. For an example, the Chinese giant company Alibaba came into the marked with a loud roar and shook the world couple of years ago. One can surf in the internet and book the item which will be delivered in their doorstep.
The another example of multiple choices for customers is the American company Amazon, European company Ebay, Indian company Flipcart are now the tycoons of the retail market which offer plenty of options for their buyers. Previously, such online retail sites were not available and the limit of internet was the main cause to limit the choices. But now, time and technology is change. One can compare the product they wish to buy in the internet with multiple suppliers and price. Souring technological advancement has make our life easy and meaningful.
To sum up, above mentioned example are sufficient to prove the people now a day do have verities of products which can meet their essence as per their budget ceiling, color option, durability and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng, color option, durability and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83461538462 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40392615251 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0488879295 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849051139942 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297093409496 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543046131145 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572133753191 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469148725712 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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