Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With today's advancements in society, it is increasingly difficult to ignore that many people have various choices rather than a few decades ago. The number of choices and quality of them is the focal point of many deliberations in many countries. Some people say that there are not enough choices, but others say a lot of choices are given to everybody.Regarding this issue, I would say that even though there are a lot of choices and opportunities, they are not for everyone.
On the one hand, there is a vast choice of occupations, it allows people to select what they really want to do. Also, in the era of globalization, more route to success are open, such as universities and working holidays. According to people who argue that there are many choices, it is no doubt true that many people can easily find their potential and discover their interests through the choices.
On the other hand, others say that, having a wide range of choices are not available for everybody. Much of the selection is provided based on money or specialities. It is significantly difficult for everyone to have many opportunities to be successful. For instance, in Korea, almost all high school graduates attend universities. However, only 8 percent of high school graduates can have the means to study at high ranking universities. The others, usually go to other countries or just study at the lower ranking universities in Korea. Studying abroads may require a huge amount of money, students from poor households cannot afford to study abroad.
To sum up, I prefer to say, even if everyone deserves to have the same qualify and the same number of chances, the chances are provided by money or specialities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9436254102 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7608441909 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141330172424 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459152826843 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368037071564 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789767305518 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386481818884 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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