Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.”
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that students should revise their curriculum by doing homework. However, this notion has come under attack by others who emphasise the unimportance of the setting of homework. This essay will elaborate on both points of view and provide personal perspective
On the one hand, some individuals hold the view that homework has an essential role to play in schooling. Not only does it assist pupils in gaining an insight into studied subjects, but also encourage an independent study habit. In other words, challenged to work through the problem without any assistance from teachers, they have precious opportunities to become more self-reliant step by step. Another striking reason is the young possessing a large amount of leisure time gravitate towards devoting their time to keep their eyes glued to screens. To cite an example, an extensive study in 2019 into the behaviour of teenagers has demonstrated that most students have a tendency to squander their spare time on the Internet, comics,... in place of to consolidate the knowledge.
On the other hand, others hold the notion that time after school should be taken advantage of to do the more beneficial activities. Pupils, for instance, are able to ameliorate their communication skills and broaden their social knowledge by participating in volunteer activities. Moreover, having a great deal of homework, students are prone to suffer from boredom and stress. There is the dramatical increase in teenage suicide rate which is reliable evidence to indicates serious repercussions of putting the young under pressure.
In conclusion, despite the fact that homework is certainly associated with some drawbacks, I believe that its benefits outweigh them in the long term.
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...cide rate which is reliable evidence to indicates serious repercussions of putting the yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35018050542 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86829863627 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646209386282 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6753636382 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224916806003 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700053927016 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538161241182 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126185552051 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217464887611 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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