"Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion."
It is true that the question of whether to give homework or not to the children at school remains a source of controversy in the education field. While a number of people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teacher, I would argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
On the one hand, homework is unecessary for children at some level By not doing homework, they can have more time for other activities. For instance, swimming or playing basketball are good choice to go after a long study at school for pupils. With less work to do, the stress level in kids will decrease which helps them be more joyful and happier.
On the other hand, I believe that home work should be given to children due to it important in study. For example, consolidate the lessons at school with tasks. By doing that, they will remember the lecture easier and understand the subject deeper by solving questions in home work. Another reason is that it helps children better at time management. In daily life, besides homework, they still have other things to do. By manage time for study with homework, they have to use time wisely, enable to finish teacher handout before deadline. When doing exercise day by day, it creates a habit to always revise the lesson. This avoids study just one day before big exam situation or sleepless week because of exam period. That makes students achieve high score with good health.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there are many advantages for doing homework, although this has some. notable disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
It is true that the question of whether to give homework or not to the children...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Notable
...doing homework, although this has some. notable disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82116788321 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43560848977 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0303641023 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335070261793 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10715885567 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159534833677 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235654974053 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201874369185 0.056905535591 355% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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