Some people believe that schools give too much free time. They feel that this time should be use to study. How do you think children should spend their free time?
Many people today expect their children to good at lots of thing. They insist that children had better use all of their time to study, even freetime. As far as I concerned, free time should be use to do recreation activities but not to learn.
On the one hand, it’s seem cruel for a child to study in leisure time. They have to learn too much in school time, then they have homework to do. It’s easier to feel under pressure if kids spend too much time studying. On the other hand, playing help children with personal development. Younger will get chance to increase social skills, because they learn to get along with others, take turns, and much more. Moreover, playing build up imagination, cognitive ability and the right way to express feelings. Indeed, most children are able to develop these skills through playing with other children. Even playing alone can help a child gain self-confidence, assertiveness, decision-making skills, and much more.
The question is, how should children spend their free time? Still, kids have to complete all their work first, then do whatever thay want that make them happy. In case there is too much work to do, they need a plan to stick to, alternating with some breaks to relax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
... today expect their children to good at lots of thing. They insist that children had better u...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...far as I concerned, free time should be use to do recreation activities but not to ...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...far as I concerned, free time should be use to do recreation activities but not to ...
^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...far as I concerned, free time should be use to do recreation activities but not to ...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...their work first, then do whatever thay want that make them happy. In case there is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81603773585 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48635919008 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2668708713 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9285714286 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423440518122 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143218567202 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131824943273 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294635399003 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640212453303 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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