Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages to primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There is ongoing debate whether teaching foreign learning languages should be adopted in primary education. Although some argue this pratice has a negative effect, learning another language in secondary school, in opinion, should be encouraged due to a wide range of benefits it bring to children. In this essay, I will explain why the advantages of this policy outweight the disadvangtages.
On one hand, people believe that primary school children’s limited abilities unable them to learn languages effectively. Children start exposing to their mother tongue comprehensively when entering primary school, and learning another language alongside could lead to language disorder. Because of insuffiecient vocabulary and grammar, children usually struggle to present their ideas thoroughly to other people consequently, some children find mixed language is an effective solution to address this language problem. While this can be practical approach to stimulate children's response to language, Abusing this method in the long could makes children find it difficult to using languages independently on their daily lives as well as when accessing complicated learning materials that using only one language.
Despites several disadvantages , I suppose that suitable teaching methods can tackle this issue, for example, schools should prioritize teach native language for children before displaying other languages sessions, implying that removing foreign languages from children’s curriculum is unnecessary. In fact, primary school children should be taught foreign language as at an such early age, they are likely to be more confident and willing to explore new things, therefore learning languages fasters and using languages more naturally compared to adults who are ussually afraid making language errors, feeling under pressure and stress of their language skills which will ultimately hinder their ability to learn language. In addition, children can have the chance to expose to different culture and customs in all other parts of the world, hence broadening their horizons. This can be explained by interaction between children and native teachers through lessons that school environment offer them.
In conclusion, there is a drawback derive from learning foreign language in primary school, however I believe this is not a major concerns since appropriate measures can be taken to restrict its negative effects. adopting other languages modules, in contrast, has been proved to have beneficial implications for children. For those reasons, the advantages of this education policy, in generall, outweight the disadvantages.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82170542636 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8661033775 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583979328165 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0510064208 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.928571429 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6428571429 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442862615332 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16727538236 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783190743682 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293343213236 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359117748735 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...aged due to a wide range of benefits it bring to children. In this essay, I will expl...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s policy outweight the disadvangtages. On one hand, people believe that primary...
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Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thoroughly to other people consequently, some children find mixed language is an ...
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Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
..., Abusing this method in the long could makes children find it difficult to using lan...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aterials that using only one language. Despites several disadvantages , I suppo...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...guage. Despites several disadvantages , I suppose that suitable teaching method...
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Suggestion:
... teaching methods can tackle this issue, for example, schools should prioritize t...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...should be taught foreign language as at an such early age, they are likely to be m...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...uages more naturally compared to adults who are ussually afraid making language errors,...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adopting
...taken to restrict its negative effects. adopting other languages modules, in contrast, ...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng other languages modules, in contrast, has been proved to have beneficial impli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82170542636 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8661033775 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583979328165 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0510064208 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.928571429 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6428571429 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442862615332 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16727538236 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783190743682 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293343213236 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359117748735 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.