Some people believe that scientists have more influence over the world whereas others argue that politicians have more influence over the world. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?
While some proponents argue that the influence of scientists on the world is more significant than politicians, the others support an opposite view. This essay will shed light on both views before concluding that governments have immense influence over the world, including the science world.
To begin with, scientists have great impact on the society. This is because most of the essential technology these days are created by them. Light bulbs, for instance, was one of the greatest inventions of the humanity, which has become an irreplaceable part of every household around the globe. Those scientists therefore would have great influence over the public as people have firm trust on them and their research.
However, government bodies would influence their citizens more significant for the following reasons. The first one is they have immense power over the law systems, which the science world also have to follow. Those laws protect the fundamental rights of the citizens, therefore, local and national authorities have great voice when problems occur. Another one is politicians contribute greatly to the wealthiness of a nation and its people. Smart and talented ones could create business opportunities for the local communities, which helps to improve their living conditions. Vietnamese local authorities always allocate resources to facilitate small businesses in the area to strive, for example. If governments don’t provide public amenities, such as public transportation, parks, and public schools that are tuition-free, people from different social-economic levels will have lower quality of life. Government bodies also play an important role in the green revolution as public transports help to reduce carbon emissions.
In conclusion, while the scientists influence the globe in certain aspects, I believe that national and local authorities have greater power as they control the law systems and have direct effects on their citizens’ lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58666666667 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86468148317 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.868365146 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335331611141 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106224253615 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112473591158 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230385560133 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127169261913 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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