Some people believe that scientists have more influence over the world whereas others argue that politicians have more influence over the world. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?
A number of people believe that scientists possess a higher impact around the globe, while others think that politicians hold more power in comparison. Although it is true that scientists have a great impact on the greater world, I strongly believe that it is politicians who have the ability to change it.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that researchers brought great changes which formed the modern world. Their inventions have a great impact on not only how the world operates but also on every aspect of people's lives. The invention of the infamous steam engine, for instance, has increased productivity by hundreds of folds compared to manual work which affects the economy and the employment rate exceptionally. Therefore, one great invention that is constantly being modified and improved can have a great impact on the world.
On the other hand, wide changes can only be made with the permission of governments, especially politicians. They bring great changes to the world by cooperating and implementing laws or policies with similar intentions to protect the rightful rights of citizens around the world. Implying heavy tax on the use of cigarettes or prohibiting the use of dangerous substances on a worldwide scale can be taken as an example of how they carefully take into consideration how powerful they are so that each individual is willing to follow them.
In conclusion, Despite the great inventions that change almost every aspect of humanity’s life, the ability to implement new laws or policies with widespread acceptance among citizens has given politicians more worldly influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21538461538 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89371896829 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9289701447 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198830668853 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887562145987 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703795229124 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134275674277 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861991868057 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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