Some people believe that studying at university or college is best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both view?
Opinions are divided regarding whether students should keep on their studies or not after graduating from high school. While many people believe that continuing to university or college studies is the best way to achieve a huge success in career, others considered working right after high school graduation as a better solution
On the one hand, there are justified reasons from those who support children in obtaining higher education. There is no doubt that most jobs require a university diploma. For instance, a recent survey conducted by Careerbuilder indicated that 80% of questioned people believed an undergraduate degree brings them a sort of certainty. Moreover, the university environment is an open and dynamic environment in which students can learn to develop themself as well as their knowledge. In particular, there are lots of activities and student associations in college, joining these activities and clubs is beneficial for future work and may help them to have the opportunity to broaden their knowledge and develop their soft skills such as networking skill, communication skill, organizing skill, critical thinking skill,... I am an epitome of this as I participated in the Human Resources Club of my University when I was in my first year college and had the chance to be a leader, improve my leadership skill and broaden my social network. Thus, I have a wonderful and fantastic job when I was still in school
On the other hand, working straight after graduation is beneficial in some ways. In some careers, learning in outside training centers and academies will be faster, more convenient and practical. External training courses with different forms (online and offline) and professional trainers from academies and businesses will help students to learn and have the chance to practice during the learning process. It takes only 3 - 6 months to finish the course and receive the certificate. For instance, some careers such as: designer, hairdresser, chief, flight attendant, sales,... don’t require the undergraduate degree, so they have an inclination to apprentice or work right after graduation that can still have a good and stable job. Besides, early exposure to society will help the young to improve the actual experience in work and life. Those youngsters will have the opportunity to dive into the reality of life sooner as well as enhance their independence and maturity.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments about working right after school and choosing to continue higher-level studies, but I believe that each way will have its own advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e many people believe that continuing to university or college studies is the bes...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...h school graduation as a better solution On the one hand, there are justified rea...
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...l and broaden my social network. Thus, I have a wonderful and fantastic job when ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...iners from academies and businesses will help students to learn and have the chan...
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...rdresser, chief, flight attendant, sales,... don’t require the undergraduate degre...
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Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...iety will help the young to improve the actual experience in work and life. Those youngsters will...
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Line 3, column 925, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...to dive into the reality of life sooner as well as enhance their independence and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, sort of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28985507246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9121316865 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8804312307 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208802134203 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639838566123 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792793045622 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148616604311 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111667441918 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e many people believe that continuing to university or college studies is the bes...
^^
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h school graduation as a better solution On the one hand, there are justified rea...
^^^
Line 2, column 816, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...rganizing skill, critical thinking skill,... I am an epitome of this as I particip...
^^
Line 2, column 1045, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l and broaden my social network. Thus, I have a wonderful and fantastic job when ...
^^
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iners from academies and businesses will help students to learn and have the chan...
^^
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...rdresser, chief, flight attendant, sales,... don’t require the undergraduate degre...
^^
Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...iety will help the young to improve the actual experience in work and life. Those youngsters will...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 925, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...to dive into the reality of life sooner as well as enhance their independence and ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, sort of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28985507246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9121316865 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8804312307 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208802134203 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639838566123 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792793045622 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148616604311 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111667441918 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.