Some people believe that studying at university or college is best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both view?
Opinions are divided regarding whether students should keep on their studies or not after graduating from high school. While many people believe that continuing to university or college studies is the best way to achieve a huge success in career, others considered working right after high school graduation as a better solution. On the one hand, there are justified reasons from those who support children in obtaining higher education. There is no doubt that most jobs require a university diploma. For instance, a recent survey conducted by Career Builder indicated that 80% of questioned people believed an undergraduate degree brings them a sort of certainty. Moreover, the university environment is an open and dynamic environment in which students can learn to develop themself as well as their knowledge. In particular, there are lots of activities and student associations in college, joining these activities and clubs is beneficial for future work and may help them to have the opportunity to broaden their knowledge and develop their soft skills such as networking skill, communication skill, organizing skill, critical thinking skill,... I am an epitome of this as I participated in the Human Resources Club of my University when I was in my first year college and had the chance to be a leader, improve my leadership skill and broaden my social network. Thus, I have a wonderful and fantastic job when I was still in school. On the other hand, working straight after graduation is beneficial in some ways. In some careers, learning in outside training centers and academies will be faster, more convenient and practical. External training courses with different forms (online and offline) and professional trainers from academies and businesses will help students to learn and have the chance to practice during the learning process. It takes only 3 - 6 months to finish the course and receive the certificate. For instance, some careers such as: designer, hairdresser, chief, flight attendant, sales,... don’t require the undergraduate degree, so they have an inclination to apprentice or work right after graduation that can still have a good and stable job. Besides, early exposure to society will help the young to improve the experience in work and life. Those youngsters will have the opportunity to dive into the reality of life as well as enhance their independence and maturity. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments about working right after school and choosing to continue higher-level studies, but I believe that each way will have its own advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, sort of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25907990315 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89546937666 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569007263923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5649892901 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213927849025 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671233509991 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943363337657 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213927849025 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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