Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
In the past few years, the number of billionaires in the world has increased considerably. It is often argued that rich people have a moral obligation of helping the society. This essay will discuss the fact, how money can make a person able in a way that he or she can help others.
The distribution of wealth in today's world is uneven and hence there is a certain group of people that holds large portion of wealth in the current times. It is believed that being rich makes the person helpful in various ways as there are all sorts of resources present at hand for him or her. For example, They can create an organization that would do charity work for the people in need. This help could be in different ways by providing education to underprivileged children, carrying out drives for the people who are in need of expensive health care and are unable to do so.
Rich people, by helping the community in need are not only performing beneficial deeds towards that particular group, but they are helping the nation as a whole. Government would be relieved of such nations were there is a large portion of the population at mercy of others, if the wealthy sector of society comes forwards with the helping hand. For example, if the bigger portion of population is depending on government for their basic needs, it would be difficult for the people in power to manage all the necessities. Here is the opportunity for the wealthy people of the nation to come forward and become saviours for government and common man. Although there are various ways in which rich people can come forwards and return the favour to society, there are many among such gifted persons who do not come forward to help.
After discussing number of ways in which rich people can help others, I surely agree that money makes a person helpful to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...le, if the bigger portion of population is depending on government for their basic needs, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66153846154 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4894874832 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504615384615 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7588901513 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248412267931 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998592170001 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567714617002 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174685884449 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352501542451 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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