Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Waste recycling and household participation in it is a big issue and there many people who believe that the availability of only adequate facilities for recycling is more important than enacting laws. I believe the government should make taking part in the recycling process a legal obligation for the general public.

First, citizens should finely divide the recyclable and non-recyclable wastes and dump them in their respective bins. However, many people do not even participate because either they do not have time, or they do not even care about it. Public co-operation can greatly help in waste recycling. Studies show that many people know the benefits of recycling waste, but they still dump their domestic waste on roadsides or landfills. This pilling up of garbage soon transforms into the breeding ground for fleas and mosquitoes, just because of public negligence towards proper recycling.

If recycling is made a legal requirement, more and more people will spontaneously take part in waste treatment because human psychology reveals a harsh truth that people abide by law only with the concern of being punished or fines and not by their conscience. If laws are framed and people start getting punished or fined, then only more people will start contributing to waste collection. This will not only clear the street from garbage piles but will also contribute to decreasing environmental pollution and diseases caused by non-rectified garbage.

In conclusion, most people are aware of the damages caused by untreated waste, and their non-compliance in the collection and recycling of garbage forces the government to impose laws with punishments and fines.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ling process a legal obligation for the general public. First, citizens should finely divid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34716981132 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87936150511 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3688242793 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418325677431 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155449472543 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823216142353 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24538204966 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601165812941 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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