Some people claim that what people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. critics say that these countries should change their died. what your opinion?
There is a recommendation that western nations should alter their diet because of unhealthy and getting worse. In my viewpoint, having overweight is possibly main effect, and implementation of good healthy diet could be a provided solution.
Presumably, having obesity can be a primary implication for Westerners. This is because high-fat food is likely to increase risks in health such as heart attack and diabetes. The rate, recently, of mortality is getting increase due to poor diet consumption in United States. According to the latest research, four American people passed away each hour because of overweight in 2016. What is the significant impact of this? It may lead to diminish lifespan expectation for Unites States citizens in one year. Hence, I believe that by consuming healthy meals, both heart attack and diabetes will not become a death factor anymore.
Moving to the solution, replacing junk food consumption into healthy food diet is the answer for western nations. By eating vegetables and fruits, workers' concentration and focus will boost while working. Recent report claim that companies offering healthy food in their lunch menu tend to boost their employee's performance up to 50% productivity. This is caused by high-level vitamins of those ingredients. Therefore, if this solution is implemented massively, disease matters would be avoided for western people.
In conclusion, eating unhealthy food has adverse effects for body condition. For this reason, health diet consumption is the main problem solving to reduce victim numbers in term of obesity.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-08 | chetan kakollu | 78 | view |
| 2019-10-02 | Fachri040495 | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-02 | Tri susilo hadi | 84 | view |
| 2019-10-02 | Bhakti | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-02 | Andi Mawaddah Hamzah | 73 | view |
- The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea.What are the reasons and solutions? 78
- The three diagram below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea.Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisonsThe growth and forecast at the coastal area of Brightsea c 11
- The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where re 73
- The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where re 73
- Schools use various methods to try and increase grades.What are the different methods they use?Which one is the most effective? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ementation of good healthy diet could be a provided solution. presumably, ha...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Presumably
...iet could be a provided solution. presumably, having obesity can be a primary implic...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h, four American people passed away each hour because of overweight in 2016. What...
^^
Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in their lunch menu tend to boost their employees performance up to 50% producti...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47967479675 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86367039019 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9584252941 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.25 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158308216201 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502235041806 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675798960941 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985589181658 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492255703876 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.