Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
It is true that one of the most considerable issues in most societies is the undervalued occupations which should be paid more than todays. Opinions are divided as to whether film actors or this kind of most preferred jobs should be out of the percentage to the significance of the work or not, but it is my firm conviction I partially agree and disagree with this view due to a couple of reasons.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that not always all actors or singers gain money in that mentioned amount and in contrast to this quite crucial numbers of them do not have any jobs. To exemp...
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which would be really dissatisfied situation for every one.
which would be really a dissatisfied situation for every one.
what is why I do not agree
that is why I do not agree
it is reality that if some people, it is not matter who they are, work hard
it is a reality that if some people,no matter who they are, work hard
if one actor study more than any doctor
if one actor studies more than any doctor
if one doctor do not make
if one doctor does not make
Sentence: And in this case if one actor study more than any doctor -releated to both of their occupation, then it is expectable that he or she should be paid more.
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