Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Contemporary world has witnessed many press reports as regards salaries of celebrities. Consequently, some commenters believe that they are incredibly overpaid. From my point of view, they worth their earnings, however, there are many other jobs’ wages should be reconsidered. Through the following lines, my opinion will be discussed along with some examples of these jobs whose salaries need to be raised.
In the beginning, the first rule of the entertainment business is that the more the fans are, the more the performer gains. Therefore, people determine actors and singers incomes indirectly. This can be exemplified by a report published in “Alahram Art” magazine about the iconic comedian actor Ismael Yasin whose salary changed dramatically throughout his career from top 3 wages to the least paid 10 actors depending on his fame. Moreover and according to the report, despite Yasin’s death around 50 years ago, his heritage has remained to amuse the Egyptian society till now. Hence, it is believed that moments of happiness in cinemas and theatres are priceless.
Secondly, however, there are vitally important as well as risky professions, their salaries are relatively unequal to their burdens. For example, risky exhausting careers such as surgery; surgeons averagely spent 10 years under the training after their graduation before they are allowed to do operations unobserved. A study, which was run by the National Health Service (NHS) in the UK stated that in comparison to their peers in the banking, surgeons’ wages are approximately 30% lower in spite of considerable longer working hours and progressive risk of acquiring an infection. As a result, (NHS) has asked for extra budgets to compensate those young physicians and improve their financial status which subsequently will enhance their professional capabilities drastically
In conclusion, although I do believe that famous individuals deserve their salaries, others who are vital but not famous are underpaid. Had it not been for those who work around the clock to treat citizens, no one would have been healthy enough to watch a movie or attend a concert.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as regards, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41839762611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94686393975 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673590504451 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8856887371 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100169392997 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306742508966 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322785828651 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559447758873 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358199010017 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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