Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be released. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many people are aware of the detrimental impact of violent movies on television and cinema. While it is argued that such productions should be banned, I firmly believe that the national authorities must pass laws to censor them.
On the one hand, there are various good reasons why the local governments should prohibit offensive films from being shown in cinemas or TV channels as soon as possible, one of which is to deter violent acts in society. It should be noted that many fans of violent movies, particularly teenagers, will imitate the film characters who behave rudely rather than kindly and politely, creating more challenges in order to keep the community safe. For example, there are many intentional shootings after juveniles watch and mimic protagonists’ actions in American schools.
On the other hand, controlling the level of violence used in films by officials is more beneficial than prohibiting them, because many viewers are entertained by them and realize it is pure fantasy. People will naturally choose whatever they prefer to watch, including violent films. Furthermore, they are aware enough that committing crimes which injure others inevitably results in terrible consequences for both themselves and the community. Besides, in movies with fighting scenes, such as the "Kung Fu" action films, the hero is always victorious and the wrong-doers are soundly defeated. It teaches the lesson that crime and violence does not pay.
In conclusion, I completely agree that local authorities should regulate the level of violence in films, instead of prohibiting abolishing them. Such a policy will control the negative effects on society while satisfying viewers' demands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42481203008 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78526778965 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2978773657 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248793552005 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778648819387 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532792218871 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138548198911 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313127268906 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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