Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some people have not benefited from it at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious that the promotion of contemporary communication technology brings many merits to human and development of society. It enables people to make contact with each other more conveniently and speedier. However, there are some objections that not all people receive profit from advanced communication tools. I completely concur with the aforementioned statement and in this essay I will give my own perspective.
To begin with, the development of technological tools has brought a plethora of immense benefit for people. In the Internet era, people are opposed to update news and overtake the global trend consistently. In addition, technological advances are also the significant assistance for people in occupation or daily activities. Taking smartphone invention as an example, in the age of industrializing people have a tendency to work away from home more frequently so smartphone is an efficient method of keeping in touch with their relatives. Moreover, during the Covid-19 pandemic everyone has to stay at home and the aforementioned stuff helps people to work through some technological platform such as Google Meet, Zoom and so on. As a result, people can derive many advantages from the promotion of technological tools.
In another case, some people can’t benefit from modern communication technology due to several reasons. Presumably, the main reason is that not all countries in the world can overtake with the global technological growth. To be specific, backwardness in some regions is a drawback for individuals accessing to modern communication methods. A typical example for this is that some countries in Africa are still living in poverty or backwardness, so citizens in these regions can’t catch up with universal technological trend or afford to buy for themselves fancy gadgets. This makes difficult for people counterparts to approach electronic devices and derive the benefit from contemporary communication tools.
In short, together with enjoying numerous benefit derived from technological advances, it is also crucial to make chance for all people to approach technological devices and propagate its significance
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, as to, in addition, in short, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59270516717 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26230310631 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9601984738 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375756562763 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129104399593 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960708215102 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234000495905 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396605168462 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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