Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the booming rate of economic developments, there are two opposing standpoints of consumers, while one particularly indicate the significances of domestic merchandises, the other highlight the potential of international brands, in relating to customers’ preference. This essay will argue how maximizing the use of local products can bring more to the table.
First of all, there is no doubt about what continental companies can offer, especially product variety and availability to suit the need of every customers. For example, providing numerous selection of fully-stocked commodities, from high-end clothing lines to exotic fruits from all corners of the world. Most of the time, however, these products are heavily taxed, hence the over-charged price tag. Besides a wide range of selection, consumers are more likely to gravitate toward foreign brands due to their popularity, which is not necessarily a good thing. Apple can be seen as an exemplar, since a large number of their new product models are pre-purchased before hitting the shelves. Although most Chinese consumers believed that it is a social norm to own Apple’s devices, there is no need to have the latest model as a status symbol.
On the other end of the spectrum, however, patriotic consumers are more comfortable with choosing to support the local’s market, which would provide more jobs opportunities for their inhabitants. To explain this, these people believe that verified sources of valued produce, which is more preferable than frozen or canned food in supermarket chains, ranging from artisan baked goods and wines to seasonal fruits and vegetables, could not be found elsewhere rather than from their region. Along with that, a great number of locals can also get a well-paid job in their own town. Furthermore, promoting and patronizing local business can also raise awareness of the native culture and cuisine. For instance, the Vietnamese’s iconic staple Banh Mi from street vendors can outweigh Mac Donald’s fast-food chain anytime with outstanding locally sourced ingredients and a rock-bottom price.
In conclusion, I concur with the idea of developing the socioeconomic state of a region by endorsing their business will ultimately bring positive effects in the long run, which will prevent local businesses from dying out and provide a stable growth for the local community.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-13 | 0102mickey | 89 | view |
- these days, people in some countries are living in a throwaway society. what are its causes and impacts can it have? 11
- The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. in your opinion, do the drawbacks outweigh the benefits? 84
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
- it is important to lean the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 601, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...Apple can be seen as an exemplar, since a large number of their new product models are pre-purcha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable choosing'.
Suggestion: comfortable choosing
..., however, patriotic consumers are more comfortable with choosing to support the local's market, whi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.474393531 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0563018909 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644204851752 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0782363805 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.071428571 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109713278763 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356616790397 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238792691162 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661691369264 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268338413019 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.