There is a fact that a number of people show their inclination to temporary employment which allows those workers to spend a lot of time on personal activities in lieu of working. While there are several benefits of short-term work, I subscribe to the opinion that it also exerts adverse impacts on human life.
On the one hand, there is little room for doubt that temporary jobs are advantageous for employees, especially young ones. Firstly, many people view short-term work as a chance to get exposed to manifold types of different jobs. An explanation is that once employees work in a new environment of a new job, they would derive various new experiences and accumulate extensive hands-on experience as well. Secondly, thanks to temporary jobs, workers would have little job commitments that might put them under pressure. Because there is no need for temporary workers to spend their time making an endeavour to promote their job opportunities or tighten relationships with their colleagues.
On the other hand, it stands to reason that there are multiple drawbacks of changing jobs frequently. First, employers would put a question mark over work abilities and loyalties of job hoppers. As a result, this puts occupational advancement opportunities of job seekers in jeopardy. Furthermore, temporary jobs pose a threat to not only the worker's career prospect but also their daily life. The reason is that it gives rise to the instability and imbalance in their life when they have to constantly change for adaptation.
In conclusion, although the merits of seasonal jobs are evident, it is my contention that people should not hop jobs often because of its disadvantages.
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case Is it a positive development 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement 73
- Many people think that secondary and high school students should learn money management as it is an important life skill To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14233576642 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93172027141 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9126934723 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19153056795 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646869468584 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193447074946 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111425767733 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231858308804 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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