In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some nations are experiencing a trend in young people who live under the same roof with their parents after graduating and obtaining a job. While that has manifold positives, I subscribe to the opinion that the drawbacks of it far outshine the benefits.
It stands to reason that staying with families is far from an adverse circumstance for young individuals. Firstly, this gives a suitable opportunity for parents to do their children a favor with ease when they encounter adversities. An explanation is that old generations who are knowledgeable and accomplished have able to pass their experience on to youngsters to assist them to go on the right track. Secondly, not only sharing mutual accommodation with their families but young people also able to share house chores, even derive financial supports from their parents. As a result, they have a chance to put money as well as time aside, and this would relieve their financial burden.
On the other hand, it is within the realm of possibility that there are multiple disadvantages when young individuals live under the same roof with their parents. First, this might deprive young adults of their privacy. For instance, some parents tend to be so overprotective that they impose their stance on their children, resulting in an increase in family conflicts and mutual misunderstanding between them. Furthermore, staying with families might act as an impediment to young people’s fundamental social skills, so they would be dependents. Accordingly, it is an uphill task for them to deal with their issues in their personal life.
In conclusion, although several upsides of living in the same house are obvious, I suppose that these upsides are overshadowed by an array of downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16254416961 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95092145263 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5341322704 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3846153846 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286443513222 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10296589241 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619061070373 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159651051589 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772306671777 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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