Some people prefer to live in an apartment, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in a house. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in an apartment compared with living in a house?
In the past, there was an inauguration of constructing houses in several countries such as tenement houses, farmhouses, and historic homes. Whereas, in ancient times, people's preference was mainly preferred for the ground level of construction. because people think that, they should receive fresh air into the house and gardening in an outdoor area. however, at present, tables have turned, currently, it is noticed that in many metropolitan cities are well-developed gradually in the progress of the architectural sector as well as modern infrastructure.
As far as benefits are considered. there are many noticeable aspects. One of the most rewarding features is that living in an apartment is more cozy, trendy and environmentally friendly. because many builders and architectures suggested to people for purchasing apartments with various kinds of amenities such as car parking, clubhouse, commercial garden, playhouse, in-built security system, and gymnasium. Moreover, people appreciated this new concept of a luxurious lifestyle in urban areas. it has considered the improvement in societies. Although, other people still believe that residential houses provide them with an independent lifestyle. it is advisable that individual landlords are having more freedom in case of renovation for in-house and outdoor.
In contrast, it has been noticed that people living in the apartment were facing some fundamental issues with their neighbourhoods. this creates conflict between them. By and large, almost everywhere, it is noticed that a high standard of living has been increased and facilitated for people in this modern era. Due to the increasing population has made the reduction of constructing houses in an urban area or downtown cities.
however, the disadvantages should not be overlooked. several apartments are established in cosmopolitan cities, but there is some drawback associated between the people living in a similar building. For instance, ample parking issues may concern worries in society. As a matter of fact, several people think priorities are a significant impact on their life. In this foreseeable future, I believe that the apartment will be a beneficial outcome to accommodate rather than living in a house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65294117647 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15608381573 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597058823529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8870833827 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5238095238 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321311992837 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771993753494 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774496802035 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184688322309 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497169008459 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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