Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, some people like to choose to devote their life doing the similar things while the others prefer to take on new change in life. Although avoiding changes can provide a person feeling of safety, I believe that experiencing different activities would be much better for some reasons.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why individuals solely follow a rountine in life. First, sice leading a monotonous life, people can find themselves much safe thanks to the stability. This is because the repetition of action allow people to avoid the pressure and stress caused by the unpredictability. In addition, people are used to doing the same activites everday, which makes it difficult for them to accept change. For example, many office-goers do not change to their regular activities including their vehicles because they used to practice for a long time.
On the other hand, I personally think that people feel the need to make significant changes to their lives from time to time because of some benefits. To begin with, by encountering different situations, people may have opportunities to gain more knowledge and usefull skill. A new job, for instance, might present challenges which push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Moreover, taking on new things makes life more meaningfull and interesting. This has a variety of positive impacts on a person as new experiences are good for not only phusical but also mental health.
In conclusion, although repeatedly doing the same activities releases people from the unsafety, I believe that the opportunities behind the change open the doors for people to achieve more exploration and fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to devote'
Suggestion: to devote
...ent decades, some people like to choose devote their life doing the similar things whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12544802867 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78957605408 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6218410027 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246357014328 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836028205746 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719821832034 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159943207663 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503332545097 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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