Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing
Change is something that one cannot simply avoid. While some people prefer this natural phenomenon, others think that engaging themselves with similar activities throughout their lives is much better. In this essay, both views will be examined and the reason why I prefer devoting ourselves to transformation is more beneficial will be explained.
Some think that it is better to leave things the way it used to be. These are the traditionalists who favor preserving their cultures. For them, culture preservation is more important for this will signify their distinction and identity as a person. In Philippines, for instance, Igorot culture still remains which made them popular worldwide since this drives tourists around the world for such authenticity they experience. Aside from this, such transformation has detrimental effects in nature. Take Bali as an example. The locals in the area chose to avoid change which leads to preserving the scenic views that their region offers; thereby making it as a well-known tourist spot. Even though avoiding change magnetize people around the world with such beauty and authenticity, it is noted that these are the countries which are less developed and only have lower life expectancy and literacy rates.
On the other hand, others, including myself, think that change is constant and therefore, will become more inevitable in the future. These are those who have gifted intuition that enables them to adapt to arduous situations. In the area of food processing and manufacturing, genetically modified foods have been consistently pursued by the scientists, believing that this innovation will combat famine and malnutrition in impoverished countreis such as Yemen and Madagascar. Another is that changing can make one's life easier. In the field of medicine for example, technology has been a key to add workforce in some countries. In Japan, robots were invented to be an aid to some hospitals and these give an ease to Japanese medical practitioners, especially during the upsurge of COVID-19 pandemic.
In conclusion, although avoiding transformation preserves one's identity and conserves natural beauty, people must learn how to accept change as a way of life to battle inevitable circumstances that might be encountered. Thus, through constant transformation, one may see the importance of innovations as the society encounters escalating global issues such as famine and pandemic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44591029024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98896963419 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593667546174 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4781845583 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.631578947 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214722512164 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641318867028 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660592014495 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129212014149 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518578267202 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.