Some people prefer to work in the same type of job throughout their lifetime while others like to change the type of job they do. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Employment duration has been a concern of the labor force, nowadays. There are people who like to work in the same field for the rest of their career life, while others think that changing careers look more appealing. Truly, permanent employment in a certain company or institution offers many benefits but changing careers also has its own positive effects on career growth. This essay will look into the detail of the two viewpoints before an opinion will be given.
To begin with, one benefit of permanent employment offers is financial stability. In the case of being a regular employee of a company, there are more benefits an employer offers. This includes retirement plans, health insurance, and regular bonuses. If a worker prefers security in the long run, staying in a firm is the best choice, especially for individuals who are breadwinner in the family. Without financial stability within the family, basic needs won’t be met and problems would occur.
Another advantage of working in the same field is the potential of being an expert in one’s job. It is backed up by empirical evidence and research studies that constant exposure and practice of skill make an individual exemplary in one’s area. For example, in the field of medicine, physicians who become experts in pediatrics has to obtain a number of years permanently working with sick children in order to handle cases efficiently, after which the become consultants. Thus, only with continuous practice of one’s career can make a person have a specialized skill, which is necessary for every field. In turn, they could train novice workers and contribute greatly to their field.
However, changing careers has its own positive effect on an individual. With exploration in many areas of practice, a person can find his/her likes and dislikes in a job. This is particularly beneficial to fresh graduates who are still unsure of what they would want in their career life. This is also a great opportunity to weigh career decisions in order to settle in a career they are sure to pursue. Although, at some point, jumping from one job to another cost time and unstable income.
There are maybe disadvantages as well with staying in the same job, such as feelings of being stuck, however, this could be remedied with modifying perspective on the job. Still, I believe that working in the same field have greater benefits for career growth and overall security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63687057319 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56049382716 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0517419426 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151491797239 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442820663933 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514648504479 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879752346521 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431906292432 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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